Edge of Surrender by Laura Griffin

Edge of Surrender by Laura GriffinEdge of Surrender by Laura Griffin
Series: Alpha Crew, #2
Published by Pocket Star on March 28th 2016
Pages: 128
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Ryan had one job: keep Emma safe at all costs. But after a night of passion, Emma takes off and Ryan soon realizes he’s not the only one looking for her. Can he figure out who’s after the beautiful government aide, and why, before she falls into the wrong hands…if she hasn’t already?
Emma’s fighting to get justice for her fallen comrades, but she can’t do it alone. She needs Ryan’s help, but that means trusting him--and dealing with the out-of-control desire blazing between them. Can there be any future for a marked woman and a man trained to kill? She hopes they live long enough to find out…

I’m simply going to leave the same review for this part as I did the first, seeing as this would have worked better as a single novel than 2 novellas separated by a few short weeks. I deliberately waited until I had both parts before I began reading and that did pay off at least, but knowing how this one ended certainly made me understand the frustrations of those who had to wait for the second part for the story’s (less than satisfactory) conclusion.

Yet Laura Griffin’s foray into military romantic suspense apart from her Tracers series seems like a tentative one, but the Alpha Crew series already has the potential to be as successful as her Texas crime-busters one – if ‘Beyond Limits’ (a sure favourite of mine) is any indication of what she can do with SEALs and strong women.

I loved the way we are plunged straight into adventure and danger: a plane crash, a stubborn woman who does everything to survive (realistically so) and a SEAL determined to protect her at all costs, even as an unexpected attraction flares between them. Yet I neither hated nor loved both protagonists though, since I simply thought it was more lust (the immediate burn of attraction) than love that connected them, all the way to the very abrupt end. There isn’t much depth to both Emma and Ryan for me to be really invested in them, nor is there a satisfying ‘Hollywood style’ taking down of the bad guy – the pace of the story is both a boon and a bane for character development in this case – and I’d actually hoped for something more concrete and poignant by the time I turned the last page.