on September 5th 2016
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Folks in town call him a monster—say he’s dangerous. But I know him simply as Elijah Hays, the quiet, gentle giant who works with the horses on my ranch. I can feel him watching me, that steady intense gaze making me crave things I don’t quite understand, burn in a way that frightens me. He’s always kept his distance…until that night.
I remember him coming to my rescue, me following him into the barn, giving him his first taste of a woman, and his inexperienced yet barely reined touch turning me to ash.
Now all I can think about is exposing the dark desire I see deep inside him—having him turn those dark desires on me. That low, gritty voice rasping orders in my ear. Those huge, rough hands holding me down when a storm blows in.
I want his surrender. His control. I want to break him…and have him break me…
‘Breaking Him’ is excellent example of erotica: lushly sensual and deeply evocative, with writing so seductive that it encloses you in a bubble where only the lead characters exist as they dance around, then feast the hell out of each other. The setting is incongruous, the background almost bland – small, gossipy town that’s close-minded and isolated – and the storyline simple, so as to put the spotlight on the heaving breaths of the couple in question.
Seen through only Abigail’s POV, we learn so much about Eli and unlike many single POV stories, this one holds nothing back and remarkably steers of clichéd-ridden moments that are often associated with fictional ‘first times’. Eli is a rare breed (pun fully intended, seeing as he’s the horse whisperer with a sultry, dark side that gets all wheels turning), an intriguing alpha who’s also a virgin, which should have raised some scepticism in me but didn’t, thanks to Gray’s fantastic portrayal of a formerly abused boy who’s had to grow up in the shadow of vicious gossip. I liked the dark undercurrent that Gray talks about and how it appears when his and Abigail’s relationship started to change, all the while keeping the wonderful, untested but changing dynamics between them. Until it all ignites spectacularly, of course, helped along by the tinder that’s their blistering foreplay, served with a bit of kink on the side.
It’s a wonderful surprise every time a book surpasses my expectations and never more so for ‘Breaking Him’ because erotica should ultimately offer something beyond blistering, explicit sex scenes. This book does and does so with such style that I can’t help but want more.